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貌似你说了很多自己的优点，却没怎么说缺点……
善意的提醒……虽说外国人不会把有点藏着掖着，写College Admission Essay的时候也应该大方一些，但是你这样写未免太露骨了。不知道你是写给老美还是老英，把自己的好处写出来是对的。但是不能这样空表扬自己。在每条优点后面都要加些具体的实例。这样才能更有可信性。
my merit is have a strong ability of self-study,a great sense of uplift,otherwise , when meet with failure , I can keep calm ,and learn from mistakes. After all, I 'm good at communicate with others,and can finish the work leader arranged ,obey the leader's management .My shortcoming is easy to be nervous,and need to learn how to keep patient .
my merit is have a strong ability of self-study,a great sense of uplift,otherwise , when meet with failure , I can keep calm ,and learn from mistakes. After all, I 'm good at communicate with others,and can finish the work leader arranged ,obey the leader's management .My shortcoming is easy to be nervous,and need to learn how to keep patient DINGDING
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封岩：绛旓細got to buy foods in the morning while dad fetched the booked cake.The party started when everone is present at night.We sang and played so happy that we threw cake to ohters' faces.It seemed that all people were happpy at the time.鎴戝垰鍒氫竴涓瓧涓涓瓧锛屽畬鍏ㄦ墜宸缈昏瘧鐨勶紟...
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封岩：绛旓細Nord pays attention to civilized courtesy very , respects the businessman who has higher accomplishment also very. They pay attention to etiquette when associating with foreigner comparatively, disregarding being formal or informal occasion, they arrange for methodical if being a host for a...
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封岩：绛旓細濂瑰涓尰寰堟劅鍏磋叮锛屽ス甯屾湜鍦ㄤ笂娴疯兘澶熶簡瑙ｆ洿澶氱殑涓尰鐭ヨ瘑銆傚湪鐧藉ぉ锛屽ス鍦ㄥ尰闄㈠姫鍔涘伐浣滐紝鍦ㄦ櫄涓婂ス浼氶槄璇讳竴浜涘叧浜庝腑鍖荤殑鑻辨枃涔︾睄銆傚ス鍚戜腑鍥藉尰鐢熷涔涓枃锛鐜板湪濂逛篃鍙互璁蹭竴浜涗腑鏂囦簡 濂逛笀澶槸涓瀹跺ぇ鍏徃鐨勮佹澘锛屼粬宸ヤ綔涔熷緢鍔姏锛屽湪鍛ㄤ腑瑕佸伐浣滐紝鏈夋椂杩炲懆鍏篃瑕佸幓宸ヤ綔锛屼粬寰堝繖锛屾瘡澶╅兘鏈夊緢澶氫簨鎯呭仛 ...
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封岩：绛旓細M2M is a singing group which has two members, they are two Norwegian grils, one is Marit( good girl), the other is Marion(active girl). Because their names' initials are all M , so the group is called M2M.Marit and Marion first met in 1990 (when they were both five ...
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封岩：绛旓細鎮ㄥソ锛杩鏄嚜宸辫緵杈涜嫤鑻缈昏瘧鐨勶紒鏈涢噰绾筹紒锛佷綘涔熺湅浜嗗惛寮曞姏娉曞垯鍟婏紵鎴戜篃鐪嬩簡銆傛垜瑙夊緱浣犲簲璇ョ浉淇¤嚜宸便傜浉淇℃绘湁涓澶╀細寰楀埌鍥炴姤鐨勩俤ear team of "secret":i am so happy to speak to you guys. before this i watched your movies and started to do things with utmost confidence. i made ...
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封岩：绛旓細Investment of more than 1 million 43,000 / acre Investment of 2 million more than 38,000 / acre Are all the "pass one five-ping" (access, electricity, water supply, drainage, communications and land formation).A total investment of 5,000 million yuan and the investment ...
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封岩：绛旓細reasonable space dividing, accurate style positioning, and unique individual thoughts. As a result, in this way can the author raise the understanding and skills of courtyard designing.鑺变簡鐐瑰績鎬濆府浣犵炕璇戜簡锛屽笇鏈涘浣犳湁甯姪锛绁濅綘姣曚笟椤哄埄锛 have a nice day 1妤兼槸鏈哄櫒缈昏瘧锛璇锋敞鎰忥紒
18753086773：姹傞珮浜甯垜鎶婁互涓涓枃缈昏瘧鎴愯嫳鏂,涓嶈缈昏瘧鍣ㄧ殑~~鎷滄墭浜唦~!
封岩：绛旓細姹傞珮浜甯垜鎶婁竴涓涓枃缈昏瘧鎴愯嫳鏂,涓嶈缈昏瘧鍣ㄧ殑~~鎷滄墭浜唦~! Through the five years' practice in college, I hope I can not only increase my knowledge level, but also improve my self-care ability, eapecially my social ability 鍙互鍟,浣犺瑙夊緱鍋氱殑璇濆氨鐩存帴Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen,杩...
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封岩：绛旓細go back to my hometown to develop my personal career and I make a plan to go deep into one industry and one company and hope to grow together with the enterprise and develop myself and make myself promoted in all aspects.绾汉宸缈昏瘧锛绛旈涓嶅鏄撳晩锛屾弧鎰忥紝璇风珛鍗抽噰绾筹紝璋㈣阿锛
